Score: 9

"this deserves better."

submission: Super Smash bros ST 5

date: May 20, 2008

i think you did a great job on this. i think that you just didn't make things dramatic enough in a fight like this.

Score: 8

"i'm sorry."

submission: My Lost Valentine

date: May 8, 2008

as for the flash it wasn't that great. it was good, but not great. you should have put in more. as for a personal thing, did he really die? i'm sorry, its just that in my experience, people would make joke flashes out of this. also, if he did, how did he die? if he truly did, i sincerely hope that you can move on.

Score: 7

"needs more"

submission: Valentines-The Love Tree

date: May 8, 2008

the tree have the words "love" made it look kind of awkward. i have yet to see a truly romantic flash.

Score: 9

"that's odd"

submission: crossroads in the sky

date: May 8, 2008

that had some good animation. it was detailed, and fluent. but the seagull was just too random. you should have put more to the story.

Score: 8

"potential is the key here"

submission: Sonic Reversal: Ep. II

date: May 8, 2008

that was nice. you have a great story, great fights and great sound. i seem to be the outlier in the review crew. anyway, the fact that it's great, doesn't mean it's perfect. during the fight, use different sound fx and make bigger, faster motions. you should also use more sound fx during scenes without fighting. you have an incredible potential. with a bit of work, you could be another alvin earthworm.

Score: 7

"super cliffhanger no jutsu"

submission: Before it Starts

date: May 7, 2008

you are good at this. it looked good, and sounded good. but it was way too short

Score: 9

"better"

submission: Weaponmaster Reborn 1.1

date: May 6, 2008

this is much better. it looks a lot more natural than your first ones. the only thing is that it is hard to distinguish what's where. just add some color and make few effects with photoshop. you should do it the file size is kinda low.

Score: 9

"nerf"

submission: Boxhead The Zombie Wars

date: May 6, 2008

it's a great game, but the only thing is that two things are severely overpowered. the devils and the guns in the defense mode. the devils kills in instants and the guns kil anything before i can kill anything myself.

Score: 8

"good for a start"

submission: weaponmaster pt.1

date: May 4, 2008

i cna see that the file size is realtively low. use a few more special effects and also that you only make one body part move at a time and the movement look unnatural.

Score: 9

"good"

submission: Castle Crashing the Beard

date: May 4, 2008

i really like this game it's easy once you get the hang of it. but it's too short for my taste. it was really hard to get the final lv without killing the boss