Score: 8

"deserves better"

submission: Asaroki 04- Closer

date: May 14, 2009

you obviously have great talent in drawing. your only problem is that not 100% of that talent is put into each and every frame. heads are too big, hands a little off, etc. not all of the character needs to be in the frame at once. the transition in the frames is better than your others, but still not there. the porportions of each body seem to change every scene, and the movement seems a little wacky. you also need some more music. but, on the plus side, it's still visually fantastic, and i love the fact that you put in voices for the characters. i like the story very much too. you can make a top notch flash if you put the time and effort into it. don't worry about time, it's your movie, you do what you want.

Score: 10

"whoa..."

submission: Power Star 4

date: September 27, 2008

this is probably the best sprite fight flash ever. it was fast powerful and absolutely epic. not only that but this is also the first sprite movie with this much emotion.
there is just one posing question. your recent flashes have been leaning towards games, so are you going to continue to make fights? they don't necessarily need to be sprite fights, but any at all? you are very skilled in at fights and i want to see more of your work.

Score: 6

"needs improvement"

submission: Smash Bros. X

date: June 13, 2008

this was ok. what really needed to improve is the sound and movements. the sound effects were kind of unfitting for this kind of animation. there were too little movements and to slow movement. a also agree with marink. sonic vs mario fights always have sonic winning. in reality this would have been a ten second fight. but, despite my criticism i applaaud that you tried a 3d fight.

Score: 8

"naruto abridged"

submission: Naruto Super Dub

date: June 9, 2008

ever heard of it? you should have just put this on youtube and made another series. not like masako has copyright on it. i don't think that this is right for newgrounds, all there is, is some voice acting and video clips of different parts of the episode. on another note, this also seems to be on the border of a parody and hate video but everyone on newgrounds hates naruto so WHO F*CKING CARES?!

everyone who sees this review will be as pissed as hell...

Score: 10

"it was worth the wait"

submission: Final Fantasy Sonic X:Ep6

date: June 8, 2008

you have improved over the time that you last subbmitted. i don't think that there are any real flaws in the quality. although, i do agree with kflame, it should have just been a movie. i would also have to disagree with hadoukendude. this thing has enough to be another smbz series. energy blasts? check. speed-teleport effect? check. crossover? HELL YEAH!!

Score: 7

"you can make this better"

submission: Maple Fight

date: June 7, 2008

ok you have fighting down, mostly. you should make the animations more smooth and don't make the movements too fast. also, you should get sound effects and get music that the fx can overlap.

Score: 9

""story"? yes. "heartbreaking"? not really"

submission: The Composer

date: June 7, 2008

it was ok. you had good animtion , but it was hard to take it seriously, in my opinion. the reason being that it was in black and white. also the style didn't really fit the mood. the music didn't help either. overall it's very good, but i like Jazza's version better

Score: 8

"that's the funniest crap i've ever seen"

submission: C is for cereal

date: June 7, 2008

total randomness.

Score: 0

"wow"

submission: Secret Episode Special

date: June 1, 2008

first i must congratulate every person who voted zero on this flash. this flash sucked more balls than the characters in it.

Score: 10

"wow"

submission: Zelda: UO Epis:6

date: May 26, 2008

i'm speaking for the whole series. i like that you gave link a voice. i also liked how you gave this a better story than most nintendo games in general. the only flaw is that you make the animations for the characters simpler. you also make it rougher in the fight scenes. but, this really deserves a ten out of ten.