Score: 8

"deserves better"

submission: Asaroki 04- Closer

date: May 14, 2009

you obviously have great talent in drawing. your only problem is that not 100% of that talent is put into each and every frame. heads are too big, hands a little off, etc. not all of the character needs to be in the frame at once. the transition in the frames is better than your others, but still not there. the porportions of each body seem to change every scene, and the movement seems a little wacky. you also need some more music. but, on the plus side, it's still visually fantastic, and i love the fact that you put in voices for the characters. i like the story very much too. you can make a top notch flash if you put the time and effort into it. don't worry about time, it's your movie, you do what you want.

Score: 10

"whoa..."

submission: Power Star 4

date: September 27, 2008

this is probably the best sprite fight flash ever. it was fast powerful and absolutely epic. not only that but this is also the first sprite movie with this much emotion.
there is just one posing question. your recent flashes have been leaning towards games, so are you going to continue to make fights? they don't necessarily need to be sprite fights, but any at all? you are very skilled in at fights and i want to see more of your work.

Score: 6

"needs improvement"

submission: Smash Bros. X

date: June 13, 2008

this was ok. what really needed to improve is the sound and movements. the sound effects were kind of unfitting for this kind of animation. there were too little movements and to slow movement. a also agree with marink. sonic vs mario fights always have sonic winning. in reality this would have been a ten second fight. but, despite my criticism i applaaud that you tried a 3d fight.

Score: 9

"needs more"

submission: UT - A Sadness. (final)

date: May 24, 2008

not that i don't like it. you can see that depending on my score. i think that the piano should have gotten a larger part. i also think that you should add some brass sounds/instruments. it was also very repititive. but overall, very nice.

Score: 10

"*sniff*"

submission: Homeward Bound

date: May 8, 2008

you made an incredible piece. it sounds like the spielberg part of the movie

Score: 9

"naruto is written all over this piece"

submission: The Sorrowful Medley

date: May 7, 2008

it's good but it sounds like saddness and sorrow (or grief and sorrow) from naruto.